Ocean next time you write a story why don't you use more wow words or at the start of your you could use guess what but well done for walking to school!
Oshean, that's a very good sentence. You can try breaking it up into shorter bits if that makes it easier to write. I also love the illustration. You got the people holding the 'stop' signs exactly right.
Ocean next time you write a story why don't you use more wow words or at the start of your you could use guess what but well done for walking to school!
ReplyDeleteOshean, that's a very good sentence. You can try breaking it up into shorter bits if that makes it easier to write. I also love the illustration. You got the people holding the 'stop' signs exactly right.
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