Tuesday 8 September 2015

Bella's steps to success

3 comments:

  1. I like how you have used Skitch and Fotobabble together.

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  2. I liked how you were able to use so many language features such as cool connectives, adjectives, alliteration and AAAWWUBBIS.

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  3. Bella you are very clever the way you can speak so clearly about your writing. You know how to capture the readers interest and use precise words to create a picture in my mind! Terrific writing.

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