Shaun i really love your descritive writing especially the part about the the sky being dark blue and yucky. You have used some excellent adjectives and I like the way you have asked questions which makes the reader pay attention!Well done!
Shaun i really love your descritive writing especially the part about the the sky being dark blue and yucky. You have used some excellent adjectives and I like the way you have asked questions which makes the reader pay attention!
ReplyDeleteWell done!