Tuesday 20 May 2014

Caterpillar story by Charlotte


5 comments:

  1. I really like how you used a lot of expression in your voice and you used a simile! !
    Thank you for sharing your story Charlotte.

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  2. I like your story Charlotte because it has lots of expression in it.From Tanner.

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  3. I like your story because you used lots of interesting describing words. By Maxwell.

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  4. I like your story because you used the word amazing. By Jae In

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  5. I like your story because you used the word wiggling and jiggling. By Jordan.

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