Tuesday 12 May 2015

Paige and Maia recounting Mrs O'Malley from Alligator Alley

We have been practicing our retelling skills. We are retelling our Shared Book with a beginning, middle and ending
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  1. Jessica13 May 2015 at 07:59

    Paige next time you could read three words at a time so that you do not have such a big breath and this way your interesting story would flow more smoothly but well done.

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  2. Vanda (Zoran's mum)14 May 2015 at 11:02

    Hey Paige, that was very succint (meaning you used few words to tell a longer story). I'm not sure what you were writing on, but you may want to ask someone to proofread it for you before you post it. I enjoyed it regardless.

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