Thursday 1 September 2016

Ada's native bird story.

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3 comments:

  1. Lucy1 September 2016 at 11:37

    You have created a vivid picture in my mind.

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  2. Spencer1 September 2016 at 11:39

    i like the word gleaming and vocab.

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  3. Ruby, Adhya, Benaiah1 September 2016 at 11:41

    I like your strong action verbs such as:swoop, gleaming, glimmering.
    Also I like the word 'unmistakable"

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