I like the way you have had a go at making a more interesting opener with your sentence, "Can you guess where . . .?" You have used some fantastic language features Catherine and I enjoyed reading your whole story. I especially likes the alliteration that you used when you wrote, "the whole school swiftly strolled over to the . . . ."
I like the way you have had a go at making a more interesting opener with your sentence, "Can you guess where . . .?" You have used some fantastic language features Catherine and I enjoyed reading your whole story. I especially likes the alliteration that you used when you wrote, "the whole school swiftly strolled over to the . . . ."
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