Wow Jessica, you certainly can write very well! I think you are super clever because you can explain your 3 stars and a wish - great job.
I think the crossing out is Ok because it shows you can revise you work and that you are thinking about making it even better!I would like to read your final draft of this story.Wonderful writing Jessica.
Wow Jessica, you certainly can write very well! I think you are super clever because you can explain your 3 stars and a wish - great job.
ReplyDeleteI think the crossing out is Ok because it shows you can revise you work and that you are thinking about making it even better!
ReplyDeleteI would like to read your final draft of this story.Wonderful writing Jessica.