Tuesday 1 September 2015

The Magic Puff by Bella

The Magic Puff

4 comments:

  1. 2 star is: I like the way you used a simile and talking
    My wish is nothing!

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  2. well done Bella I look forward to discussing a bit more of your story tomorrow
    best wishes Catherine.

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  3. Bella good story I liked how you where including Elmo's Brother & Sister saying the spell backwards and yousing talking mark but I wish you could some ,,,,,,,,,,, from Paige

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  4. great job Bella. I liked how you included the brother and sister. From Paige

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